Persuasive writing

 

For writing this week we had to do an persuasive writing with counts as in what topics people write about and what brainstorming actually means.

The Magic Show

 last week on Friday we went to this healthy Magic Show. Around after lunch we headed to the hall. He introduced himself and ended up preforming us a show about being healthy. On the plate was Protein, Vegetables,  Crain's and fruit. On the first thing he did was put fire on the book and a few minutes later a bird flew out of it. Next was he got a box and put a rubik's cube in it and then he shook it and the rubik's cube was done. And then he wanted a volunteer to come and put on an iron man custom.  

ANZAC DAY - we will remember them

   𝔸ℕℤ𝔸ℂ 𝔻𝔸𝕐 - 𝕨𝕖 𝕨𝕚𝕝𝕝 𝕣𝕖𝕞𝕖𝕞𝕓𝕖𝕣 𝕥𝕙𝕖𝕞

Today for literacy we had to do an Anzac slide to represent people for those who died and fought for us.

The ice Shelf

Wk5 Explanation writing

Bob the crab

this is my writing about Bob the crab and this writing gives you some detail about, crabs and how they live in there habitat.

Shark attack

Year 5 and 6 camp

Hi my name is Phoenix and this is what happend in camp,

Campn is a cool activity and you get to sleep in tents,

Who,on wendsay the 6th of march to the 8th of march

What,we did kayaking, slip and slid, cyclone ball,

When,On march

Where,At pt england school.

We sleep on the field,

Camp is to Wendsay to Friday,

My lighlight was kayaking, I liked going to the pools and concert night, and the food.

My highlight was Concert night. I liked going to the pools it was really fun and so so warm.

Mr Burt Mr Somervil, My uncle came for security, Pt england . Miss Va'afusuaga, Sivaenah and Tonga.

I learnt that on camp i was respectfull and kind to people, because it is very very importan that you go on camp.

flying

About one thousand years before Jesus was born, kites are invented in china to lift a man off the ground they used to look down on the enemy durning war.About 900 years later he was the first person to try to fly with is wings and he jumped of a big church and he died. About 500 years ago he was a artist and he used to draw lots of designs.Around 1700 he desighs stuff like  a airship he flies it for the king portugaul. .1843, George Cayley he published his desighs for a diplane and he all so designed the 4 forces of flight . Sixty years later he was a german creator that flies the planes.in 1930 he was the first man to creator the first engon.40 years later there was a who made the first jambo .Fast-forward 40 years a man made a jetpack.the same year a man made a car into a plane.  

matariki day Recount

Just keep swimming

Dictation race with my buddy

Takapu

The robot

Hemi hated to do the lawns so he deicide to make a robot out of an old  pair of scissor and a blender, Dad’s hair no tra a pair of stake knifes and a lazer pointer and old stringes and a old computer. So hemi decidie to make a robot out of that. Hemi stayed up all night to make the robot. So he made the robot and the robot was alive. Not alive yet tho. In the morning hemi taked the blanket off the robot he made. So he putted the robot at the back and opened the blanket. And hemi started the mower and pushed start. And the robot mowered the lawns. And hemi sitted on the chair and watched him mow the lawns. So hemi was sleeping and hemi was woken up by a yelling. And the robot was gone.

So what hemi did was he walked in his house and he asked his dad, dad do you know were my robot is and the dad said no. So hemi  said ok dad ill ask mun, What hemi did was asked his mum, mum do u know where my robot went.

To be continued.

New Zealand birds

race with my buddy.

This was a race.My buddy was Leylani and Leylani was the writer and i was the reader.Have a go and read this.

what i did at camp

this is what i did about camp.Look closely at the words and read them.

All about me

Kia ora, my name is Phoenix and I am 9 years old. I am in Year 5 at Pt England School in Auckland. My teacher is Mrs Buchanan. It’s fun at school. I like to play with my friends at school.

At home me and my friends play Robloxs together. That is fun too.

Magic number

Cross Country.

Cross Country

It is important to remember to catch your reader’s attention when you are writing and to hold it using descriptive details that are interesting.

Spend some time thinking about how you felt at the beginning of the Cross Country race, while you were waiting for Mr. Burt to yell “GO!”

Using this sentence starter, begin writing here:

As I stood at the starting line, waiting for Mr. Burt to yell “Go,”  I felt as if...I was so so excited and so so happy when i was going to run.When i was about to run my.Mum came and recorded me and my Dad.and.Baby came to watch me run.But I ran so so fast until i stopped.when i went out of the kate people keep saying run run run don't stop but i stopped and there were some muddles that i had to go through.And then we went back to sit down and wait for everyone is finished.