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Tuesday 29 August 2017

Using a Ruler



This week we are learning to us a ruler and putting them on the ruler

Monday 28 August 2017

Magic Number


This term we are learning about magic number and the number is 51 and how i did it was i added them together


Monday 21 August 2017

the phase of the moon.


Write the story into this Doc, the one you just did in your book.


Start your writing much of it is letter by the sun.This amount changes each day.The faces of the moon depend in its position in relation to the sun and earth.As the moon makes it around the Earth we see the bright part of the surface at different angles.These are called faces of the moon.It takes 20 nine days for the moon to orbit the Earth

Thursday 17 August 2017

writing summary ch 2

                                                                           Chapter 2
Is that Lilly went to look for her cat that she found on the street.And when she went outside her cat was gone .So she new who taked her it was her sister and it was Tia.

Wednesday 16 August 2017

The frog

The Frog

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Start your writing here:

Their was a really smelly  green  frog gripping onto the tree trying to get the small cricket that is on a leaf.So he outstretched his tongue out and tried to get the cricket on the leaf.And he open his big wide eyes to get the small cricket.When he finished eating the frog  burped when he ate the cricket.The frog ran away to his lake.

Friday 11 August 2017

shading fraction



this term we are learning about shading fractions.shading fractions its so easy to do so i did this and i  added the number.


my shapes


ancient toy

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We will talk about how we are going to craft this paragraph together.


Sandwich


On my plate is a delicious sandwich ready for me to eat.  Filled with chicken and salad, the sandwich melts in my mouth.  The sandwich is sitting in my lunchbox waiting for me to eat.


Start your writing here:

A yo yo is an ancient toy that children enjoy playing with. A yo yo is an  ancient toy you can do magic things on it.And i play some games with it just imagine i had a yo yo and i did a cool thing on it and i did a mistake with my yo yo.And i buyed one.and everybody's yo yo can go down and ups.

Problems with time



this week i am learning times




Lily has a secret

This week we are reading my new book called Lily has a secret.And there was a little cat called Angels and she liked to bite and run around the tree to find Moses, Lily tried to pick her up but a piece of wire twisted around its back leg.She putted  her down and she looked sad.So Lilly sister Tia came and Lilly went inside and Tia stared at the little cute cat and Tia was looking for Lily but Lilly was not listening.today i am on chapter three and this is what happens. Lilly was going to school but she was sick and all her friends sisters and brothers were laughing at her.

Guardians of the galaxy.

Welcome back! Who is excited for this term? We are going to leap into writing by creating some exciting recounts about our immersion assembly!
WALT: plan for our writing


When we plan, we need to think about:
  • Who our audience is.
  • How we are going hook this audience in - how are we going to capture their attention in a creative way?
  • How we are going to create a description of the event which makes our audience feel like they were at the event too.
  • How we are going to keep our audience interested as they read.


Step 1: Brainstorm.
What you could include:
  • Descriptive words
  • Ideas for a hook
  • Key things you can remember from the assembly
    • What you enjoyed
    • What made you laugh


Step 2: Plan your own recount (double click on the drawing below).




Step 3: Write your recount! Click here to read a model recount.
Transition Words
Past tense
First...
Next...
Soon...
During…
While...
After...
Later...
At first…
Initially…
Once we…
Once I…
At last…
Finally…
In the end…
You should be telling the audience what has already happened since we have already had Immersion Assembly!

E.g.
Watched
Had
Saw
laughed
If you can think of any others, use them! This is just to get you started.


Start writing here:
On the first day back we walked to the hall for a assembly when we sat down mr brt talked to us before the lights can go on.Than the lights turned of and mr somerville and mr jakobsen fighted the aliens that was so funny.

Team 1 movie was about planets and the sun and the moon