Cross Country
It is important to remember to catch your reader’s attention when you are writing and to hold it using descriptive details that are interesting.
Spend some time thinking about how you felt at the beginning of the Cross Country race, while you were waiting for Mr. Burt to yell “GO!”
Using this sentence starter, begin writing here:
As I stood at the starting line, waiting for Mr. Burt to yell “Go,” I felt as if...I was so so excited and so so happy when i was going to run.When i was about to run my.Mum came and recorded me and my Dad.and.Baby came to watch me run.But I ran so so fast until i stopped.when i went out of the kate people keep saying run run run don't stop but i stopped and there were some muddles that i had to go through.And then we went back to sit down and wait for everyone is finished.
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