Hola Phoenix, I'm Jason from Belfast School. I like how you actually did some reasearch about Valerie Adams. You taught me about when she was born, the sports she plays, and even what makes her special. Maybe next time you could add pictures next to each text depending on what it is about. For example, you could add her throwing a Shotput. Do you like playing Shotput?
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hi,phoenix well done,and keep on trying and you are also right about dame valerie adams,keep it up!,phoenix.
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Hola Phoenix, I'm Jason from Belfast School. I like how you actually did some reasearch about Valerie Adams. You taught me about when she was born, the sports she plays, and even what makes her special. Maybe next time you could add pictures next to each text depending on what it is about. For example, you could add her throwing a Shotput. Do you like playing Shotput?
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