Immersion Assembly.

Immersion Assembly

Welcome back! Who is excited for this term? We are going to leap into writing by creating some exciting recounts about our immersion assembly!

WALT: plan for our writing

When we plan, we need to think about:

• Who our audience is.
• How we are going hook this audience in - how are we going to capture their attention in a creative way?
• How we are going to create a description of the event which makes our audience feel like they were at the event too.
• How we are going to keep our audience interested as they read.

Step 1: Brainstorm.

What you could include:

• Descriptive words
• Ideas for a hook
• Key things you can remember from the assembly
• What you enjoyed
• What made you laugh

Step 2: Plan your own recount (double click on the drawing below).

Step 3: Write your recount!

Transition Words	Past tense
First... Next... Soon... During… While... After... Later... At first… Initially… Once we… Once I… At last… Finally… In the end…	You should be telling the audience what has already happened since we have already had Immersion Assembly! E.g. Watched Had Saw laughed
If you can think of any others, use them! This is just to get you started.

When you are ready to post on your blog, use the pictures in our Pav Media Folder.

Start writing here:

Today we were Walking to the assembly and we were the first one in the hall and we listen to mr burt do his musical madness and they were singing musical madness musical madness and their song was so cool.Next we did was we were answering question about the musically mad ness.Finally team 1 was playing cards with the teachers in team 1.team 2’s  movie was about playing music and i was about to cry cause it sounded like a sad song.team 3’s movie was about songs and Miss eddie Miss king Miss Davis And Mr Moran.