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Friday 27 October 2017

Sprint Track

Sprint Track

We have just been outside racing against our friends.

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Use these words above and below to help with starting your sentences.

Transition Words
Past tense
First...
Next...
Soon...
During…
While...
After...
Later...
At first…
Initially…
Once we…
Once I…
At last…
Finally…
In the end…
You should be telling the audience what has already happened since we have already had Fun Racing Morning!

E.g.
Watched
Had
Saw
laughed
If you can think of any others, use them! This is just to get you started.

Plan Here:
COOL:
First
Next
Once we
During




TOPIC SENTENCES:
P1:Mr moran told us to line up into a girls line and a boys line.When we were on the field we were racing and you have to be the 1st 2nd and 3rd 4th to be in the finals and me and Julia nearly slipped.because the grass was slippery.

P2: the first group was to Norah Jade to Leylani and we had to sprint because it was a race.And the 1st 2nd 3rd and 4th was Mia.Maddie.Nature.Norah Jade




Start your writing here:
Yesterday we went in 2 lines and we had to sit down on the concrete and wait till Mr moran clapped the thing and then we had to race and it was to Norah Jade to Leylani and they Sprinted so fast and i stayed in my spot waiting for my turn.So then it was my group and we raced to the finished line and me and Julia nearly slipped.Now it was the finals and in the finals was.Joseph.Jerry.John.and i don’t know who else was in the finals.Now it was the hand and feet and hands was the last person to won and John and Mr Moran won.



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