Friday, 28 July 2017
Welcome back! Who is excited for this term? We are going to leap into writing by creating some exciting recounts about our immersion assembly!
WALT: plan for our writing
When we plan, we need to think about:
- Who our audience is.
- How we are going hook this audience in - how are we going to capture their attention in a creative way?
- How we are going to create a description of the event which makes our audience feel like they were at the event too.
- How we are going to keep our audience interested as they read.
Step 1: Brainstorm.
What you could include:
- Descriptive words
- Ideas for a hook
- Key things you can remember from the assembly
- What you enjoyed
- What made you laugh
Step 2: Plan your own recount (double click on the drawing below).
Step 3: Write your recount! Click here to read a model recount.
In the end…
You should be telling the audience what has already happened since we have already had Immersion Assembly!
If you can think of any others, use them! This is just to get you started.
Start writing here:
On the first day we went to the hall for a assembly and their where bright bright stars on the roof when we sat down and all of the school looked at it when the light turned off.and mrs burt told the school it was team 1’s turn they were flying to some planets and back.
Team 2 were singing Songs and they were so cool everybody laughed.i like bands.
Team 3 were our one and mr moran was frozen and miss eede and miss moala were dancing.
Monday, 3 July 2017
Friday, 16 June 2017
On Tuesday we had to stay inside and make our kites out of paper and straw.But first we had to do it on our Chromebook i made a kite and it was pink and purple and yellow.So when we were finished we had to get in groups on the table and flow.than when we got in groups and we got a colourful straws and Gray straws.when we were finished we went outside to fly than and my kite broke four times.So i keep trying and trying then i got it.
Monday, 12 June 2017
Soaring through the sky i feel like superman crashing through the waves in feel like a dolphin.This experience is a feeling you only get they so often.Hopping over the waves butterflies fill my tummy.Spinning and twirling through the air in show the supporters all the tricks in am able to do.I can hear cheering and screaming from all my supporters.The hardest part about going to pull the kitesurfing is packing up.Having to pull the kit in on windy day is hard work kitesurfing is such an incredible sport.