Magic number

Sprint Track

Sprint Track

We have just been outside racing against our friends.

Use these words above and below to help with starting your sentences.

Transition Words	Past tense
First... Next... Soon... During… While... After... Later... At first… Initially… Once we… Once I… At last… Finally… In the end…	You should be telling the audience what has already happened since we have already had Fun Racing Morning! E.g. Watched Had Saw laughed
If you can think of any others, use them! This is just to get you started.

Plan Here:

COOL:

First

Next

Once we
During

TOPIC SENTENCES:

P1:Mr moran told us to line up into a girls line and a boys line.When we were on the field we were racing and you have to be the 1st 2nd and 3rd 4th to be in the finals and me and Julia nearly slipped.because the grass was slippery.

P2: the first group was to Norah Jade to Leylani and we had to sprint because it was a race.And the 1st 2nd 3rd and 4th was Mia.Maddie.Nature.Norah Jade

Start your writing here:

Yesterday we went in 2 lines and we had to sit down on the concrete and wait till Mr moran clapped the thing and then we had to race and it was to Norah Jade to Leylani and they Sprinted so fast and i stayed in my spot waiting for my turn.So then it was my group and we raced to the finished line and me and Julia nearly slipped.Now it was the finals and in the finals was.Joseph.Jerry.John.and i don’t know who else was in the finals.Now it was the hand and feet and hands was the last person to won and John and Mr Moran won.

Immersion Assembly.

Immersion Assembly

Welcome back! Who is excited for this term? We are going to leap into writing by creating some exciting recounts about our immersion assembly!

WALT: plan for our writing

When we plan, we need to think about:

• Who our audience is.
• How we are going hook this audience in - how are we going to capture their attention in a creative way?
• How we are going to create a description of the event which makes our audience feel like they were at the event too.
• How we are going to keep our audience interested as they read.

Step 1: Brainstorm.

What you could include:

• Descriptive words
• Ideas for a hook
• Key things you can remember from the assembly
• What you enjoyed
• What made you laugh

Step 2: Plan your own recount (double click on the drawing below).

Step 3: Write your recount!

Transition Words	Past tense
First... Next... Soon... During… While... After... Later... At first… Initially… Once we… Once I… At last… Finally… In the end…	You should be telling the audience what has already happened since we have already had Immersion Assembly! E.g. Watched Had Saw laughed
If you can think of any others, use them! This is just to get you started.

When you are ready to post on your blog, use the pictures in our Pav Media Folder.

Start writing here:

Today we were Walking to the assembly and we were the first one in the hall and we listen to mr burt do his musical madness and they were singing musical madness musical madness and their song was so cool.Next we did was we were answering question about the musically mad ness.Finally team 1 was playing cards with the teachers in team 1.team 2’s  movie was about playing music and i was about to cry cause it sounded like a sad song.team 3’s movie was about songs and Miss eddie Miss king Miss Davis And Mr Moran.  

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Chapter one

                                         chapter 1

today i'm reading my new book called Once upon a cruise.i still cant were still on Disney cruise and Disney cruise is still tiny said a blond girl beside her. i Closed my eyes and repeat the cruise of beautiful and helpful and fun.Employee motto in my head even thought its the thirteenth person so far has anyone be bad or good today i forced myself to smile so everyone can play with me.we walked into the dinning room and we only have a couple of hours cause my face hurts so we ate our dinner so fast ahh my face is falling apart.