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Friday 11 August 2017

Guardians of the galaxy.

Welcome back! Who is excited for this term? We are going to leap into writing by creating some exciting recounts about our immersion assembly!
WALT: plan for our writing


When we plan, we need to think about:
  • Who our audience is.
  • How we are going hook this audience in - how are we going to capture their attention in a creative way?
  • How we are going to create a description of the event which makes our audience feel like they were at the event too.
  • How we are going to keep our audience interested as they read.


Step 1: Brainstorm.
What you could include:
  • Descriptive words
  • Ideas for a hook
  • Key things you can remember from the assembly
    • What you enjoyed
    • What made you laugh


Step 2: Plan your own recount (double click on the drawing below).




Step 3: Write your recount! Click here to read a model recount.
Transition Words
Past tense
First...
Next...
Soon...
During…
While...
After...
Later...
At first…
Initially…
Once we…
Once I…
At last…
Finally…
In the end…
You should be telling the audience what has already happened since we have already had Immersion Assembly!

E.g.
Watched
Had
Saw
laughed
If you can think of any others, use them! This is just to get you started.


Start writing here:
On the first day back we walked to the hall for a assembly when we sat down mr brt talked to us before the lights can go on.Than the lights turned of and mr somerville and mr jakobsen fighted the aliens that was so funny.

Team 1 movie was about planets and the sun and the moon

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