Today we went to the assembly. I liked the team 3 family feud and miss belts team win and miss kings team lost. I like the team2 move mis Nalds team was funny but mis nald more is funny and mis Shimano kick the ball and she can kick it past mr moran and the team was so fun and I love it and the move is so fun and they had chocolate and I love it so much it's fun it was the best more that I like
Well done with your story Phoenix. You are trying really hard with your writing. Try and use the word "and" less and start new sentences. We will work on this in class over the next few weeks.
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